Essay 1 Chinglish Elimination Exercise: Retype the whole sentence with correct grammar without changing the original meaning. Possible answers with grammatical errors corrected have been supplied.


  1. Until now, US is still playing the role of hegemony, but it's not a hegemony since ther late 1970s.

The U.S. hasn't been hegemonic since the late 1970s, but it is still pretending to be today.

  1. We can imagine if the hegemon , America, leaves the affair of the East Asia alone, there may be a war breaking out between China and Japan under the strong nationalist sentiment.

If the American hegemon were to withdraw entirely from East Asia, one could easily imagine a war between China and Japan breaking out over strong nationalist sentiment on both sides.

  1. But whether there is only one way –a global “benevolent hegemon” to lead the worl, to realize a peaceful and prosperous world?

It is worth asking, however, if a global, "benevolent" hegemon's leadership is the only way to realize a peacful and prosperous world.

  1. Today, the EU, Russia, and China and other emerging powers of the challenges and the mistakes of US international strategy, the United States decreased relative strength.

The rise of the EU, Russia, China, and other large countries have combined with challenges and mistakes of U.S. international strategy to reduce America's relative strength in the world.

  1. I believe America was the only hegemon after USSR breaking up until 2003, when America intervened Iraq.

I believe America was the only superpower from the USSR break-up until 2003, when America invaded Iraq.

  1. Whether the international community needs a benevolent hegemonic power to maintain order?

Does the international community really need a benevolent, hegemonic power to maintain order?

  1. Although the United States has done many wrong things and bad things, but it also made important contributions.

Although the U.S. has made many mistakes and done some bad things, it has also made important contributions to world peace and prosperity.

  1. American dollar which gold hook become the world dollar.

The U.S. dollar (USD), tied to gold, became the standard global currency.

  1. Until 2010, there was no WMD found, but the people of Iraq got through seven years' life in the war.

No WMDs have been found in Iraq to this day, but the Iraqi people have had to endure more than a decade of life in a shifting warzone.

  1. The USA's rise progress shows it's a complete,stable constitution which is hard to be collapsed.

The progressive history of the USA and relative stability of its constitution show a country whose institutions are durable and highly unlikely to collapse.

  1. After the WWII, the U.S became a hegemon for a long time.

After WWII, the U.S. enjoyed a long period of hegemony.

  1. I think each country are important equally, and nobody has noble status.

I think each country is equally important, and none, despite their dominant power, have special privileges above the others.

  1. As we all know , America has been losing its' superpower status, especially in economic sphere.

Most agree that America has been losing its superpower status, especially in the economic sphere.

  1. Why the USA is still the global hegemon?

Why is the USA still the global hegemon?

  1. In another word , America's privileges not only take self-interests, on the contrary , The USA gets hurt.

In other words, America uses its privileged, hegemonic status not only to realize it own self-interests; on the contrary, many of its choices have inflicted self-harm.

  1. Global Hegemon Is Necessary for the world peace (Title corrected: A Global Hegemon Is Necessary for World Peace )


  1. Because of the American's advantages in the world and the need about keeping the present system and even more the world stable, we should admit the American's hegemonic status, which perhaps is a little difficult for China, a raising country.

Both America's advantages in power and the need to keep the present system and, moreover, the entire world stable lead us to recognize its hegemonic status, though this admission is perhaps a little difficult for China, a rising power in the system.

  1. The history and reality have told us that America is not global hegemon anymore and it is unnecessary to have a global hegemon.

    Recent history and the current reality offer abundant evidence that America is no longer a global hegemon, and having one is also unnecessary.
  1. Trump promises to let the country return to its former glory days, where America was the global hegemon without any competitors.

Trump promises to return the country to its glory days, when America was the undisputed global hegemon.

  1. Except to economic power, military power is thte solid guarantee to keep and maintain global orders.

Besides economic power, military power is an even more solid guarantee to maintain global order.

  1. But we all want to promote the development course of international progress by interstates' coordinating, discussing, and even arguing instead of straightly interfering others.

But we all want to promote global development and progress by means of interstate coordination, discussion, and even argument rather than interfering directly in the internal affairs of other states.

  1. Without stability and equity, everyone can never protect his rights or even his life.

Without stability and equality, one cannot protect one's rights or even one's life.

  1. In fact I think the US' advantages in political and economic had been declining after World War II.

In fact, I think the U.S.'s political and economic advantages had been declining since World War II.

  1. Moreover, in the presence of hegemony, the world is not completely stable and the war is ongoing all the time.

Moreover, even in the presence of hegemony, the world is hardly stable. In fact, wars rage constantly in every corner.

  1. Hegemon will hurt vulnerable countries' interest, but it can keep overall peace.

The hegemon will damage the interests of vulnerable countries, but overall it can help to maintain world peace.

  1. As a student majored in IR, we all know that there are some people who is anarchist they believe that international world is anarchy state and international cooperation is difficult and unsure.

As students majoring in IR, we all know that the world system is anarchic, and international cooperation is difficult and unsure.

  1. Only by the U.S. and HST, we can not live in a world full of peace, stability and harmony.

A hegemonic U.S. alone, as favored by HST, is far from enough to ensure a world of peace, stability, and harmony.

  1. Do you want to live in a democracy and freedom world?

Do you want to live in a free and democratic world?

  1. Such as the UN, the Bretton Woods system and something else.

Examples abound, including the UN, the Bretton Woods System, and other international institutions.

30. When we mention about “the global hegemon,” the first word which most people cross their minds must be America.

When anyone mentions "the global hegemon," the first country which comes to most people's minds must be America.